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Fr. Justin (Edward) Hewlett's avatar

This reminds me, somehow, of a poetry fragment that I wrote once—maybe just from the subject matter; your tone is much more solemn (solemn laughter):

To whom will you give the sky?

Sandy gave it to me.

“The sky is always changing,” she said,

“The sky will always be free.”

To whom will you give the stars?

The sun and the moon up above…

I always wanted to finish that one, but the ending always came out tacky somehow. You’ve managed to land this one rather nicely.

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